My first poem

November 20th, 2006 by Vineel
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You are as sweet as honey,
As sensitive as a wing of butterfly,
As solid as a diamond

The gentle smile on ur face
Seems to be a twingling star’s glaze

The moments we share all along
I can’t forget life long

If the question comes, who r u to me?
I can’t append all the above, may be.

But the thing I can say without a thought
That you are the person on the heavier side of my heart.

You are the one to whom I never lie
And to whom I fear to say bye.

Though you are not aware
About the moments we share
You are the special friend I ever had.

Though not in your heart
Hope I am in your mind.

I am with you forever in happiness and care
I wish you a Happy New Year.

Thanks for being a good friend for me.

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5 Responses

  1. Archana Says:

    vineel ji!

    too good rasav!! awesome! :)

  2. uday Says:

    Hi Vineel,pretty good poem!

    I would not say stuff like ‘awesome’ and ‘out of the blue’ but I would want to thank you for expressing your trueself and for treating this community like a ‘home’ for your thoughts.

    I hope I will get to read more such good stuff from you.

  3. J.Sridharan Says:

    Very Good One, Vineel.

  4. Vineel Says:

    Thanks to all :-)

  5. Usha Says:

    Superb vineel

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